literature

the journey.

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"What if he stops?"

"Keep going."
NaNoWriMo is the big thing right now. I'm at 26 000 words and plan to make it to 60 000 by the end of the month. In the meantime, this came to me while I was in the shower of all places. While focusing on getting it to 6 words, I was also curious about how others would perceive the story. What scene does these six words conjure?

EDIT: changed "dies" to "stops"

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MartinSilvertant's avatar
'Stops' in this context is better than 'dies' because it has bigger implications in regard to the journey. 'Going' is inherently part of a journey. This makes me wonder though, is a journey without an end still a journey or does it require a goal?